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2 day, 2 years ago, 2 years gone2 day, 2 years ago, 2 years gone2 day2 years ago2 years gonen no 1 will b mentionedn not 1 2nd will be 4 got4 it's water under the bridgen it's water over the fallsheading down the Mississippi 2 the Gulf of Mexicon not all has been 4 givenbut the hurt has almost healedn salty tears can't b cried againbut the feelings still are real.
mimimimifrom the moment she was bornshe was my worldmy sunshinemy lighttiny handstiny fingershold tightlynever to let gosleeping softlyon my chestsafewarmsmile when she's sleepingsafe n secure4 ever b happy4 ever be the tiny handaround my fingern u r the promisei will forever keep.
my word remains the samemy word remains the samei don't eat much now a daysi save all my money just to pay the renti drink a lot of coffeei eat a lot of breadi don't smoke as many cigarettesi don't cry as many tearsn soonmy self imposed sentence will be overn my promise will not be brokenn my word remains the samei sit on the outdoor stoop carving stonepassing timedoing timeas i wait for my sentence to be over2 summers have comen gonen i think aboutpissing on the memories she left behind4 me 2 think aboutn i dothink aboutwatching clockslistening to the Rolling Stonessingas time goes byn i think aboutlooking at photographs takenlong agolooking at some 1i hardly knewmaybe not at alln i ask myself who?n i ask myselfwhat the fuck was that all about?n nowhere can i find the answern maybe i really don't want to knowbut i left the door openanywayshapeor formn still somehow my heart got brokenn the strings stayed out of tunen no 1 plays the banjowhen the sun is behind the m
2 balance stones2 balance stonesBrian stopped by todaycleaning gutters full of fall leavesn spring pollenn conversationn before leavinghe mentionedit's time to remove the balancing stones from the top of the fenceit's timeafter 2 yearsit's timeafter 2 yearsmy promise keptmy word trueafter 2 years of waiting2 years is a long time 2 wait for some 1 that will never happen2 years is a long time 2 wait for some 1 to return2 years is a long time 2 wait for some 1 who will never returnbut i my promise wholen i kept my word true2 years ago i asked for reason2 years ago i asked 'y'?n some 1 larger then Idecided to keep me livingsome 1 larger then Idecided to keep me aliven reason was answered with the letter 'y'n Brian stopped by todayasking me to remove the balancing stones from the top of the fence.O4/21/12